Greymouth, New Zealand
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You have great interesting info i liked how you put in photos of the badges.
Your sentences started with capitals. you need question marks for questions. You had a good amount of facts.
You put in a lot of information about police, which is a good thing.You could of added some pictures to make it look WOW.I love how you talked about the dogs.
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well done I learnt a lot about police and patrol dogs maybe next time you could add in why they use dogs and no other animal
Your information was well executed and it taught me a lot of the things that you need to do to become a police officer.You repeated some of your information.It was clear and easy to read.
Thanks for your comments.
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ReplyDeleteYou have great interesting info i liked how you put in photos of the badges.
ReplyDeleteYour sentences started with capitals. you need question marks for questions. You had a good amount of facts.
ReplyDeleteYou put in a lot of information about police, which is a good thing.
ReplyDeleteYou could of added some pictures to make it look WOW.
I love how you talked about the dogs.
Good info
ReplyDeleteNeed question marks
It was clear
well done I learnt a lot about police and patrol dogs maybe next time you could add in why they use dogs and no other animal
ReplyDeleteYour information was well executed and it taught me a lot of the things that you need to do to become a police officer.
ReplyDeleteYou repeated some of your information.
It was clear and easy to read.